Torturing Love

Hope you feel this :(

My heart beats to but one

So I must learn to love

again.

With trying tears 

you watch me burn

only to do so

again..

.

I try to push my heart

  to side with yours

only to feel this

again.

Alas I want to be free

away from this

 but you'll be

sad

.

again.

I want to stop this repition

but I fear I cannot

 you'll get hurt

 again

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Fear is the enemy of all. Learn what you must and take the leap. Strong write.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

AWW!! I love your review,And you have truth in what you say,learn what you must and take the leap-this answers for learn to love again and make the choise to move on?? wow you really do know thank you so much for reviewing :)

[Robert Lindsay]

You give it good shape and repetition
The meaning is a bit too well hidden for me though:
Only to do (what) Only to feel ( what) Away from this (what)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Only to watch me as I burn again in pain,Only to feel like I'm not getting anywhere and try again,Away from this false painful love. Yes i admit you have to think about this and repeat as you read to feel the torture of the words but thanks for reviewing
:)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

As for the shape.i wanted to have it in a heart form,and the lines through is how I feel:trying to love but failing drawing a line and trying again and failing again,again and again..

[Robert Lindsay]

Getting a shape is a clever touch. Now i see why you wrote is in a minimalist way. Nice try.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thanks man I appriciate it :)