Torturing Love

Hope you feel this :(

My heart beats to but one

So I must learn to love

again.

With trying tears 

you watch me burn

only to do so

again..

.

I try to push my heart

  to side with yours

only to feel this

again.

Alas I want to be free

away from this

 but you'll be

sad

.

again.

I want to stop this repition

but I fear I cannot

 you'll get hurt

 again

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Great write, I too feel the emotions and pain , but well written.
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thanks James :)

[Dark Rider]

Short, but packs a lot of emotion. I could feel the pain and agony in the words. And the way you wrote this poem was interesting, and it fit perfectly. Great Job. :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thank you Dark Rider

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Carl , this is written with sensitivity toward heartbreak...
I felt the consideration and respect within each drawn line, as if
you were trying to erase the pain, the agony.

Well done, my friend!

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Cant believe I didn't see this thank you Robbie*

[Stevo The POE-t]

Okay first off I have to say the way you wrote this intrigued me. Meaning the font with the crossed out lines like you were covering up what you wrote about her... Just so she couldn't read the pain she has caused you by leaving you high and dry... Your beating bleeding heart still burns for this woman you speak of... I can feel the connection you have for this woman... She must have shot an arrow right through your heart but when she left you she ripped it out without icing the open wound... I can feel the hurt in this piece as well as the love you still have for her...

You want to stop crying over her as you know she will never come back. But you can't just because of what she meant to you. And you know you can't show her you're hurting the way you are... Sorry bro but this is an excellent write... Can't wait to read more...

[Carl Drake Barnard]

:) I so Love when people try to read my stuff,great to see a different perspective!

[Nicole Williams]

"with trying tears
you watch me burn
only to do so
again."
and you say your a softy. BAH!
I absolutely love it, and I cant wait to read more.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hahaha read your heart out :)

[Riley Jules]

I've been there. Inspiring work, keep at it !

[Carl Drake Barnard]

sad place,thanks Riley :)

[TL Boehm]

the repetition of a heart beat, of a situation, of love - well penned.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thank you :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Great work, the character in the poem is trying to love but can't cry and is unable to fake it. Message from the poem, love can not be fake, love is real.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Well thank you :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

and so true!

[Rebeca Espadas]

I can say I felt everything. Lovely!

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Aww Thank you :)

[Aseel]

really nice written poem with lots of emotion .
Sorry for the broken heart i suppose it is really a very hard feeling that is why many people find it hard to take the try and love but it is not a choice so i suppose when you will find your real love she will make u forget all the past :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe thanks Aseel,It's okay i mean some indiens get married and they never chose who the want their parents did and they learned to love one another but thank you i appreciate it :)