The Angels

May the angels keep you till morning.

may they guide you through the night.

may they comfort all your sorrows.

may they help you win the fight.

may they keep watch on your soul.

may they show you better ways.

may they guard you while you're a sleep.

may they see you through your days.

may they show you new hope.

may they still your every doubt.

may they claim your every fear.

may they hear you when you shout.

may they keep you till morning 

more than this I cannot pray

.and if I ever fail you

 may the angels be there that day....

:)

Reviews

[Aseel]

really nice poem that comfort the person who hear it espicially from a lovable one

just on the line saying ' more than this i cannot pray ' when i was reading it i thought there suppose to be ''if i cannot pray'' to have the meaning you want to make it . or may be yoy didnt put it cause you meant another thing by this ?
and really it was very nice poem good job

[Carl Drake Barnard]

no,thanks for your review though but ''if I cannot pray''doesn't work,i prayed for her safety every night and it wouldn't do well with the end

[Aseel]

aha i got it sorry:) .

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe it's cool no worries :)

[☾Panda☽]

I read this with tears in my eyes, it makes me cry, cause I hope one day, they are there for me too.....a very peaceful poem, keep up the good work

Sincerely Panda

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thank you for your review :)

[☾Panda☽]

no problem your welcome (:

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

Awesome great flow was so easy to read :) like rhymes and angels

[Carl Drake Barnard]

:) Hehe You're to kind :)

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

haha im not kind when I dont like ...lol

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Fantastico!! I need honesty :)

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

dont we all :) me toooo !

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Ill go through it now :)

[Dark Rider]

This was a really great poem. Short and sweet, and all around beautiful. I liked it. :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thank you
:)

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Sweet and flowing. Well done.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thank you :)

[KaylaScarlett]

I love the word flow. Almost as if it were a song.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

aww thanks :)

[KaylaScarlett]

No problem

[The Invisible Girl]

Such a beautiful and sweet poem! :) 100/100 keep it up!

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thank you so much T-I-G I read some of your chapters of your books just now and i liked a couple of them really nice,so if you like righting and reading go through Depth of sorrows it's my book and thank you again :)

[The Invisible Girl]

You're welcome! :D okay, I'll read it! :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe thanks enjoy and plz see anything thats bothering tell :)

[Acucena G.]

Good one, job well done. keep it up

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thanks for reading :)

[GirlOnFire]

What a sweet comforting poem. Nice work :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thanks!! :)

[Maria997]

one word...AMAZING :) I really love how you put this together and the closing words were perfect!