Love at first Bite

This poem has the whole shabang: Fangs, sexual attraction, blood, love, and oh I almost forgot VAMPIRES!

 

You creep into  my room

While I'm innocently asleep

I'm dreaming of you

You slowly remove my sheets

 

Those red eyes examine my body

Every square inch of it

My breathing gets heavy

As if my mind knows whats coming

 

A vein in my neck catches your attention

And you lean in closer, hunger taking over

Your mind can only think anout it

It's savoring the very scary moment

 

All the while you grab my head

Turn it so my neck is facing your way

Leaning in you breathe in my scent

Now you know you're going to stay

 

A sharp bite, the pleasent feeling

My eyes flutter open slowly

And then comprehending

Panic starts to flood my veins

 

You lean back to expose

those sharp fangs, and blood

That's running down your chin

Those eyes, fathomless and dark

 

They are a tunnel of death

Just scary and unknown

Now I lean in closer

And bite his soft throat

 

A rush of warmth

Touches my tounge

Subsides my hunger

And know i know...

 

"Yes," you moan

I smile more than satisified

There's an electric current

This right here was love...

 

                     ...at first bite

 

 

Author's Note

Please Ignore ALLL spelling errors and/or grammatical errors. Thank you for reading!!!! :)

Reviews

[brittneymarie]

Great write :]

I really liked it esp the ending

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hmm.. a nice one here... a really cute aura to the entire thing ..and the end is just perfect...
a treat to read and with vampire love season right now... it's a really good write...

take care..and keep smiling.. :)
niki..:)