First Kiss

The kinda kiss that gives that fuzzy feeling inside. :P It decribes Bella's first kiss with Edward right after the Meadow sceane in Twilight. But I'm sure everyone has had they're quirky kissing moments.

First Kiss

We stare at eachother

for a long time

Not really comprehending

What going to happen next

 

My eyes are wide with surprise

As you lean in towards my lips

Unsure at first

Then triumphanit as our lips move as one

Like two living things

that can't live without the other

 

This is my first kiss

is it yours too?

We'll you remember it later

As I will when Im dreaming of you

 

I acidentally lose control of

my craving for you

And lean in with more force

your surprised by my reaction

With soft fingers you lift my face away

Looking at me with your amused eyes

That seem to twinkle in the light

 

"Sorry," I mumble, embarresed

"Bella, you will be the death of me," you say shaking your head.

but then you kiss me more softly this time

More sweet than the last

And now I'm wishing

This should of been our first kiss

Author's Note

Please review! This is A bella and edward poem.

Reviews

[~Shadow Kissed~]

totally good :)

[DaGirlNxtDoor]

it was sooo dreamy from the 3rd stanza and down...one thing you can change in the first stanza is wher it says"we stare at each other for a long time" you can change "for a long time" into "what seems like forever" idk thats my opinion...anyway hope this helps you get the top writers badge :)

[anneliese]

Love it! i like how it flows and i can just feel all the emotion running through this piece!