Bitten

Bitten

A Poem by Cคɾเภค{♥}
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Bitten

I was practicly Bitten

The first time you smelt my blood

but you knew it was forbidden

Even though it was more than a must

 

You say you won't

But I know you will

You will bite me sooner or later

Even if it ends in a kill

 

Why do you hate yourself?

You did what you had to do

Just let go, there's nothing left

I won't move

I was yours the moment you saw me

 

I was bitten by your apperance

Bitten by your eyes

Bitten by your "I can't"s

Bitten by your lies

 

But it dosen't matter to me

Wether your a vampire or human

As long as I still see

Us remain for more than ever

© 2008 Cคɾเภค{♥}


Author's Note

Cคɾเภค{♥}
I really like this one, so what do you think? Ignore Spellin errors :)

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i thought it was really good and rather enjoyed it. great write and great read!

Posted 15 Years Ago


great write! "i was yours the moment you saw me" love that line : )

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it, very lyrical. Great job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I Iiked it especially the line ( doesnt' matter to me if you're a Vampire or a human) nice write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Cคɾเภค{♥}

The Heart, CA



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