Brick Walls

How i feel confined in my own freakin house! And maybe within myself too..

 

Confined in myself

Trapped within my lies

It's like nothing I have ever felt

Now is the time

To break down this brick Wall

 

How did I end up in this mess?

Was it because I never saw myself clearly

In ways more or less

Can I get out of this hole of lies and despise?

Maybe this is the way it is for me

 

I must muster the strength

the hope and the truth

To break down this icolated mood

The brick wall that I must break

If i must by force

 

Im so tired!

I need to get out

if I dont

I'll surely go insane

within me and myself...

 

 

Author's Note

Ignore spellin errors. Personaly I don't think this one is one of my best. There's just something missing. I dont know. Reviews Please?

Reviews

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I'll surely go insane

within me and myself...

can't stop feeling the same... or maybe i am already insane... really really relate to this one... and maybe the cement of my wall.. is too strong to ever be broken... yet all i know is.. one day... i wanna break free....

a lovely lovely poem... :)

[Lady Lazarus.]

I must muster the strength
the hope and the truth
To break down this icolated mood
The brick wall that I must break
If i must by force



perfection.
such a sad but powerful poem.
love and yearning trying to break free.

[E. Liza Jayne]

I read your poem. I am not a poet, so I can not give a proper critique. I can however empathize with the feeling of being confined within oneself. The brick wall is self-imposed, and only as strong as we allow it to be.