When the...

When the...

A Poem by Carewell Kasilag

When the sky was blue,
you reach for me,
When the rainbow comes,
you embrace me.

When the sky turned gray,
so did you.
When the thunder came,
you bolted out of the door.

You left me in a storm.
wet and shivering.
A swirl of sadness,
is what you've made me..

© 2016 Carewell Kasilag


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Honest and direct words.
"You left me in a storm.
wet and shivering.
A swirl of sadness,
is what you've made me.."
I did like the above lines. The words showed powerful emotion and place. Thank you Carewell for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on October 1, 2016
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