Dreaming from Waking Up

Waking Up from Dreaming

I wanted him to join this dream with me,

But he woke up

I wanted him to join this dream with me,

But I woke up

I wanted him to join this dream with me,

But he woke me up

I didn't want him to join this life with me,

And he fell asleep

He didn't want me to join this life with me,

So I fell asleep

We didn't want to live this life together,

So we fell asleep

I didn't want to wake up

So I kept dreaming

He didn't want to wake up

So he kept dreaming

We didn't want to wake up

So we kept dreaming

Reviews

[Rana]

The playing with the words, the hiding of meanings in the simple yet metaphorical words.. This poem is a lovely one..

[Careline]

Thank you, that's what I personally love about it. It's short, it's vague, and it can be interpreted in so many ways :)