Words - 1/3

Rain, darkness, fire.

Rain.

Rain is for sorrow,

bitter hopelessness,

drowning, falling, breaking,

quiet and alone.

Darkness.

Darkness is for evil, 

twisting, blackened, teeth-barring

heart-jarring

bone-snapping evil.

Fire.

Fire is for white hot,

flaming, raging, scorching pain, 

a single-minded fierce

determination,

made only stronger by what it consumes.

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

very good.....I felt it ended a little abruptly as if there was more to come though

[CarcinogenicDreams]

I was originally going to write more, hence the 1/3 in the title, but I lost interest. It was also originally about cliches in writing, and the end was pretty sarcastic, but if I ever do finish it, that might change.

Thank you for taking the time to review, though

[Dr. Wood ?]

I think that sarcasm and cliches is a marriage made in heaven...Good luck with completing it