Slept So Long

Slept So Long

A Poem by Caradoc
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We were each other's dreams,
but we slept too long and when we woke,
the world had passed us by...

© 2016 Caradoc


Author's Note

Caradoc
Came up with this when I saw a picture on facebook about dreams and not wanting to wake up.

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Makes me think of those times in my much younger years when I was afraid to admit that I liked a guy and so he never knew and he liked me too, but I never knew. And then years later you meet at a party randomly you're like omg I had such a huge crush on you. And yet it never happened because we waited too long to reveal.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Caradoc

8 Years Ago

Dang. You have my sympathies. That's some bud luck right there.
Papaya

8 Years Ago

Yeah... oh well. I'm sure it happens all the time.



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Makes me think of those times in my much younger years when I was afraid to admit that I liked a guy and so he never knew and he liked me too, but I never knew. And then years later you meet at a party randomly you're like omg I had such a huge crush on you. And yet it never happened because we waited too long to reveal.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Caradoc

8 Years Ago

Dang. You have my sympathies. That's some bud luck right there.
Papaya

8 Years Ago

Yeah... oh well. I'm sure it happens all the time.
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Pax
wow, this is what i really admire about short pieces like this... speak less but profoundly meaningful... sometimes reality breaks the dream... more often we dream too much forgetting to stamp our progress then eventually we lost we hold so dear... great as always my friend...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Reminds me of the movie Inception. Love this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Never a good idea to spend your life wishing for a life that passes you by.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Caradoc

8 Years Ago

Indeed. But sleep can be so addictive. Just ask Endymion.

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