Hollow

Hollow

A Poem by Caradoc
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Another depressing piece.

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you are there
though i cannot say how you arrived
and i vaguely recall the when

i have tried to chase you out
and put others in your place
throughout all you've refused to budge

i lie, and lie, and lie
to myself most of all

one day i'll be rid of you

but the words are hollow
like my heart
i know you'll be there

always

© 2016 Caradoc


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Caradoc
Because it's what I do best.

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hollowness
the worst feeling someone can create in us
writing a book or trying to-
one of the chapters is titled that
and a lot of the the book is about someone creating this in the main character
thanks for the read

Posted 8 Years Ago


Caradoc

8 Years Ago

Indeed.

I too am working on a novel. So from one hopeful novelist to another, I wish .. read more
Some people are hard to get out of our heart. What cured me was a really bad relationship for 16.5 years. I forgot all about that other guy, almost ...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Caradoc

8 Years Ago

I can't seem to find a cure.
A very sad poem. Some people will haunt us forever. I like the honest tone and accepting the sadness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago



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