Wither

deep amidst this garden
blooming
is the only flower
that does not wither
kept alive
by my thoughts of you

Author's Note

Some things, it would seem, do not fade with time. They linger, some like ghosts of memories best forgotten. Others, like ruins of ancient places waiting to be rediscovered and granted new life.

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

This is beautiful. Shame on the people who take the time to read an outstanding poem such as this and do not take the time to comment. The emotions are shiny -- brilliant, like tears at the corners of your eyes you didn't know were coming but came anyway ... HEY YOU, OUT THERE, in the feed, take the time to read this piece and comment.

[Caradoc]

You are far too kind. But thank you. :)

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

I agree with KL! She is kind in her words, but you are so talented! You really should be getting tons of readers.

[Lyn Anderson]

Yay! I am so happy I have gotten people to visit this talented writer.

[V]

This provides a beautiful image, I like your word use a lot. You've created a short, simple but deep poem. I can relate to the feelings woven into your words, thoughtful and hurting decorated with a lovable kind of darkness.

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

This is stunning! So beautiful in its simplicity...there is so much said in so few words. I am enjoying the fresh clarity of your work. Thanks, KL!

[boblakin]

There are certain things, though mostly more often, a certain someone that can never be forgotten no matter how far distant they may seem.

Perfectly scribed ion my view.

boblakin.

[Caradoc]

Indeed. Thank you for your review.

[Einstein Noodle]

KL told me i should come and read ..glad i took her advice ..your poem is a bouquet in just a leaf .. minimalism is bountiful when done just so ..i think this poem does all that and more .. the theme is everlasting and universal and can be too well worn ..but "Wither" is all brand new ... thanks for sharing ..
E.

[Matching Socks]

Awww, well the fairy tale romantic heart of mine immediately think of beauty and the beast, the Rose.
Except for the Rose does wilt, just very very very very slowly. As do all things eventually if not nurtured properly. This is a lovely poem, so glad KL sent me here.

[Caradoc]

I wonder if anyone else will think of "the Rose" when they read this. That's certainly an interesting take on it. Thank you for your review. :)

[Matching Socks]

You're welcome. If they like Disney princesses they might. :)

[redzone]

I have a "flower" like that, mine though more memory that should fade but doesn't... isn't also ironic that the other flowers fade far to quickly while this one remains as fresh as a Black Rose.. hopefully your flower is one that should be granted new life and blooms colorfully in your garden...

KL often writes from ideas in your poems, using you and your words as reference points, I can understand why... your poetry has a sharp metaphorical edge and a layered texture... thank you

redzone