Captivity

Depression, Insanity, Darkness, Madness

Everything is said and done

Everyone has had their fun

Time to make my exit from this fairy tale

In the clouds my mind is free

Reality in hell calls out to me

The darkness tries to swallow me whole

Grasping on to the last spark of light and hope

I twist and turn trying to find a way

To keep my insanity sane

The weight of the air becoming torture

Afraid to sink in any lower

My minds becoming twisted and sick

Defeated, I fall in to it

Psychopathy now taking over

My demons have pulled me closer

My lines are fading rapidly

Forever alone in this Nightmares Captivity

               ~A_Nightmares_Captivty

Author's Note

First ever poem. Please don't take words that don't belong to you.~Thank You

Reviews

[Collyn]

I love this poem. I really like your word choice and the whole story/message overall. You are an amazing writer and should be proud of this work!

[ANightmaresCaptivity]

Thank You so very much ^.^!!!

[Zugzwang]

This is definitely a dark piece, but I enjoyed reading it, as I do like the dark side. I think it's an excellent first time effort. Well done.

[ANightmaresCaptivity]

Thank you so much! I appreciate it.

[Amory Grey]

Oh man this gave me a similar feeling to that of taking a sip of whiskey, that burning down your throat.
Well done, it certainly is a dark poem.
Cheers

[ANightmaresCaptivity]

Thank you! I appreciate the positive comment.

[Amory Grey]

It's my pleasure