I am

I am

A Poem by Captain Rilen

I'm wondering who does things right, whether I'm living the right way.

I'm wondering who thinks there's a right way to live your life.

I'm wondering who my friends will be in the coming years.

I'm wondering who I will be in the coming years.

I'm wondering who I am right now.

I'm wondering who I am.

I'm wondering.

I am. 

© 2016 Captain Rilen


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I love the way you have written this out, very nice pattern.
The repeating line made the poem sound more poetic I like that as well.
This poem is full of thought, as clearly you where wondering haha.
Great write I liked it :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Cogito ergo sum. :) Nice to see a new piece captain! I know who at least one of your friends will be in the coming years. Don't wonder too much, you'll become wonderful.. wait, that's not even a bad thing. Anyway this is life, just live it. Pretty sure there's no "right" way... but perhaps there is? If you find out, lmk :)
Stay inspired.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Doesn't matter your age, the wondering never stops.
As we move through the phases of our lives, we find we have to reshape and remake ourselves...and we wonder yet again. This is a great poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Well this wondering doesn't end ever I think.. But these are indeed good questions here.
"I'm wondering who does things right, whether I'm living the right way.
I'm wondering who thinks there's a right way to live your life."
Loved these lines. Nice reading it ☺

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Captain Rilen
Captain Rilen

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It was time for a new description! I'm sorry I don't review work as much but if I get a review from you I will always try to post one back once I have the time. University and work are both demanding .. more..

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