Winter Day

Winter Day

A Poem by Captain Rilen

Leaves sway,
surfing the air.
The scent of Roses,
ever so fair.

What a beautiful day,
of a beautiful winter.
When the sun comes out,
We see the clouds splinter.

Promoting some calm,
some tranquil inner peace.
No present alarm,
some emotional release. 

© 2015 Captain Rilen


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Such a lovely description of a dormant season.Yet,your description makes it lively and thriving.Some lines are quite palpable to the senses.Well done,sweet Aussie:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


A rather beautiful poem. Although I don't care much for winter, this poem made me see it in a different light. Great job

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Captain Rilen

9 Years Ago

Thanks wordshaker :) Winter is my favourite season, as strange as that may sound.
WordShaker33

9 Years Ago

Summer and fall are mine. I love the rainy seasons:)
I love poems like this. Describing those small sweet moments in life. It's blissful. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Captain Rilen

9 Years Ago

Thanks for reading!

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Captain Rilen
Captain Rilen

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It was time for a new description! I'm sorry I don't review work as much but if I get a review from you I will always try to post one back once I have the time. University and work are both demanding .. more..

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