Happy Thoughts of Mine

Happy Thoughts of Mine

A Poem by Captain Rilen

Life falls forward,
as time flies by.
Creativity dismembered,
Yet you still try...

Let's not lie,
Out of fear of the truth.
Let words fly,
Even if they're uncouth. 

Let them out,
Let them be!
Let your heart,
Be set free.

For you see,
I won't imprison me.
I'll be out and about,
and filled with glee!

I'll stand quite stout, 
and remarkably tall.
Though these things,
mean nothing at all.

I am the past,
I am the future.
I change so fast,
It's part of my structure.

All we humans are,
is completely adaptable.
Re-writeable,
honestly remarkable. 

© 2015 Captain Rilen


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Such a beautiful and happy poem :) Loved it!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I like your optimistic take, yet I can still sense your own unique take on it. I too would like to believe that we can teach new tricks to old dogs -- wink wink :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haha..this sounds so uplifting! Especially the last stanza. :))

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I loved this Kirk! So nice to read some simple happy poetry! Excellent poem with great rhyming and a brilliant storyline
Thanks for sharing.
Keep up the great work. :)


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Added on June 14, 2015
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Captain Rilen
Captain Rilen

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It was time for a new description! I'm sorry I don't review work as much but if I get a review from you I will always try to post one back once I have the time. University and work are both demanding .. more..

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