An Overdue Farewell

An Overdue Farewell

A Poem by Captain Rilen

I miss you,

More than I can bare.

Your soft scent,

Your loving stare.

 

It feels as if,

I can still see you there.

Still touch your warm hand,

And put my own through your hair.

 

You're right by me now,

Your skin so fair.

Your taste so sweet,

Showing me that you care.

 

Now you are long gone,

It gives me quite a scare.

For I know that love,

Is incredibly rare. 

© 2015 Captain Rilen


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Beautiful poem Kirk. I think we can all relate to this feeling. The only good thing is that we can learn from experience. Don't let love go lightly. It's incredibly rare as you say. Thanks for sharing. Keep smiling. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Captain Rilen
Captain Rilen

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It was time for a new description! I'm sorry I don't review work as much but if I get a review from you I will always try to post one back once I have the time. University and work are both demanding .. more..

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