Honest Look

Short.

envision oceans of ornate gore
flailing lake of monotonous dark art
relegated to a lack of proper tact
resigned to repulsing and refusing to retract

honest humanity and all it feeds back
when viewed in a quiet moral vacuum

Reviews

[Conversations Kill]

Wow this piece is beautiful! It did give me directi mage of hands trying to coem out of a black sea, millions of them... that kind of desperation is horrid. I enjoy this piece much, but I ask, why use vacuum? Is it because you're "taking it all in" that is, as the observer?

[Shards]

wasn't sure which piece of yours to read first
but I was intrigued by this one's title...
and as for the poem
I can only hope to be as talented a writer as you one day
really incredible skill