(working title) my morbid love poem

(working title) my morbid love poem

A Poem by Captain Savage
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I wrote this after coming home from a poetry read, it hit me at 2 am as I was trying to sleep

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Here is to all the people
that ever did you wrong

may their faces droop
their toes and feet grow
rows upon rows of
corns and boils.

If I could hunt them
down and exact
your vengence
you know I would

let me smite those
who have kept you
from trusting another

kept you from me

if I made them pay

for what they did
 
If I made their
children pay for what
they did
 
would you love me?
 
If not would you at
least consider
something more than friendship
 
If I could make those
useless sacks of
worthless scum
 
choke on their own
violence and abuse
 
would you move on?
 
If I burn down their
houses, ruin them financially
leave them no safe port
 
would you breath
a sigh of relief?
 
If I could kidnap
them, bring them
handcuffed and blindfolded
 
would you exact your
own form of revenge?
 
What if I offered any of this
 
would you accept my help?
 
If I gave you the tools
and the know how
 
would you help me bury
them, still alive and
screaming into the night
 
could we then go
merrilly, on some date?
 
I offer you vengence
upon all the people
that ever hurt you
 
I pledge not to become
one of them
 
If I could leave them
bleeding, and pleading
for their lives
 
would you join me in
beating them within an inch
of their worthless,
disgusting lives?
 
If I could offer you this
 
would you let me hold
your hand and walk
with  you side by side
 
or put my arm
around your waist?

© 2009 Captain Savage


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Captain Savage
Captain Savage

Norman, OK



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