the start of something violent

the start of something violent

A Poem by Captain Savage
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short,simple,and to the point.

"
my violent thoughts are a whirl wind
destroying your mental image
flowing out now, what they touch you can not mend
the aftermath will make you grimace

 
© 2007 Captain Savage

© 2008 Captain Savage


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Ahh so much agony and 4 lines. You wrote them well.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 11, 2008
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Captain Savage
Captain Savage

Norman, OK



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