Day in the Sun

For Trevor (aka T.J.F.)...my lover

Our day in the sun was

Among the best I've ever had.

Although I did get burned,

I didn't mind much, 'cause I was with you.

 

Our day in the sun was

Beautiful as we held one another.

I love having our violent makeout sessions,

Because I feel like we move as one.

 

Our day in the sun was

Perfect.

Reviews

[Raja]

And I get tanned to read this day in the sun ...LOL

I like the simplicity of your words mixed with a clue to know more about your creativity. That is why it is interesting to me.

Good write.

Thank you.

Raja

[Justin Tobey]

I like the passion you've mixed into this piece. The repetition of "our day in the sun" was nice, and I liked the first stanza particularly. Sometimes things are too good to be ruined with such insignificancies. Thank you for sharing! :D

[Flow]

There is a rash of love poems today on WC.. it seems the SUN has burnt a few hearts into a loving pen. This is wonderful as all you love poems are truly feeling and sensual. Another great write of yours~