You

You're my drunk slurrs

That mean nothing.

You're the sand on my feet

That'll soon be brushed off and lost.

You're a stray eyelash

That'll soon be wished away.

Reviews

[Flow]

this is a little different from your last few poems. a little surprised but pleased with your simple words of truth. Good write my friend~

[Kara Emily Krantz]

yes yes yes i love it

my first impulse was to correct 'slurs' but then the double 'r' works really well, because it's a slur in itself, eh? very nice hehe :)

i really enjoyed the brevity and simplicity of this - and i loved how you ended it with being wished away. alas, isn't that how it goes?? :) ::sigh::