Falling

For my T.J.F. <3

Trevor James...my T.J.F.

You're good to me,

And just amazing.

 

To describe my adoration for you

Would be hard indeed,

Because words can't describe what I feel.

 

You're my want and my need,

With you I can taste the candy,

And you...you give me even more butterflies than the last.

 

Trevor darling...my loverface...my goofball,

May Fourth 2008...a wonderful day it was.

I called you mine and you called me yours.

 

Trevor dearest,

You're my fire and my air.

You are what keeps me going,

You are what makes me want to go to school,

You are the reason I'm happy.

 

You gave me hope,

And you gave me love.

Now I think I'm falling for you deeper and deeper.

I think I'm falling in love with you, lover.

 

Fate works in many ways,

And our lives crossed paths on purpose the day you wore green.

 

I remember our first kiss,

And I remember looking in your eyes the first time.

I remember how you held me close as the rain

Fell hard atop our heads.

 

I love the way you touch me,

And the way you hold my hand.

I love the way you caress me,

And the way you melt my heart.

 

Trevor,

This is for you, and I hope this isn't weird.

But my feelings are expressed for you here,

Because if spoken, I probably would've stumbled on the words.

 

Oh lover of mine;

I'm your silly and your my goof.

We go together like two peas in a pod;

Like fire to wood;

 

My hand is forever yours to hold,

Please, don't let go of it, because you hold my heart too.

 

The next time I see you, I want to

Violently punch your lips with mine.

 

The next time I see you, I want to

Hold you so we could never part.

 

Loverface,

I know you love my dumb pet-names I have for you,

And the rambling notes I give to you.

I can tell you love the way I joke,

And the way I'm too damn random.

 

I am yours, and you are mine.

Forever till the end, because I want you for a life-time.

Trevor James...I'm falling in love with you so soon.

Author's Note

It's sort of slopped, I think, but I'm finally expressing the feelings in writing.

Reviews

[Raja]

It is good to read and feel the honest look toward a lover. It seems you have emptied whole words for him on the paper, and it is great to find that! How many really does have the power to writer such an exceptional piece! Not too many I suppose.

I got the pleasure in reading your poem, and I must say it is very much occasional in the midst of so many poems. Rarity exists there.

Thank you.

Raja.

[Flow]

I wish to offer only one change for it.. I normally don't do this, but I am compelled to, today. I think that your already in love with him and not falling in love with him. Maybe it is hard for you to say but trust me your in love already my friend. So why not just say it in the poem? You are so in love that all I can see of you are your shoes hanging out the void of love because you have fallen head first and it is a beautiful thing for both you and trevor... I jest with you because this is a beautiful poem as is. Well done "Loverface" that was too cute.. :)