In Bloom

I couldn't think of another titile, so Nirvana helped me out...lol

The door opened with ease,

As a new smile appeared in the dark, dreary, dead room.

The air was quiet, and the noises were awfully subtle.

The new smile made this room beautiful like that of a rose,

A rose which danced in the breeze on a warm spring day,

And a rose that twirrled as it is held in calm hands.

 

The door closed abruptly,

Our smile began,

Began to sing, and began to dance.

It danced liek the roses, from outside the door,

And the room commenced whispering, but still very subtle.

 

The darkened room began to grow.

It grew with life, and grew with beauty.

Beauty from our smile,

And beauty from the rose in which its lovers hands

Held it tenderly.

 

Now as the once dead room,

Hosted life,

A life of passion soon emerged.

It emerged from the familiar rose,

Which was in bloom.

 

Our sweet smile caressed the once dreary room,

And passion made its entrance.

Reviews

[Flow]

No matter what the environment it seems love can make it a beautiful place it is all up to the people envolved. You have beautiful poetry one that gives away the love you have for him. That is a beautiful thing and I hope your pen continues to write these love versus for us to read here. Well done!

[An owl on the moon]

Stunning and beautiful, breathing life into the soul of love! Each phrase is like a perfect painting... Amazing!!!

[Ralphy]

Beautiful write. This one flowed right to my soul as I fantasized each and every word as it breezed pass my heart. The image is as vibrate as the message. Thank you for the write.