Forgiven

Forgive me God,

For I have sinned

A sin which is not worth forgiving.

I my area of expertise,

I have made my own set of stones.

Yes, there are ten, just like yours,

But mine I believe are well thought of.

 

Forgive me God,

For I have sinned.

Five out of seven isn't that bad...

To me, anyway.

But in my area of expertise,

I have constructed my own sins.

Yes, there are seven, just like yours,

But mine I believe are well thought of.

 

Forgive me God,

For I have sinned.

Reviews

[jazz]

this was ill.

[Flow]

this one makes me think of technology and how man tries to create the same things as God has created and how man tries to out do Gods work. This one is interesting and makes me think so loved it.. well done.