Mike

Not to be mistaken with my other poem "Michael" about my uncle.

Oh Mike,

How do I convey my feelings to thee

Without blushing on my paper?

 

And to be honest with you,

Cause I always am,

You're the one that gives me

"Permanent butterflies".

 

And if I could pick my favorite thing about you,

I'd pick your smile

Because even in the dark,

I can still see those teeth of yours.

A smile has never looked better on anyone

Other than yourself.

 

Author's Note

=]=] I mentioned one of my other recent poems in here..

Reviews

[Cassandra]

Aww how sweet :) That last stanza "and if i could pick my favorite thing about you...other than yourself" even made me smile and I'll bet if "mike" got to read this .. he'd light up a room for ya. What a really sweet honest poem.

[thecoolone52]

very short and simple but it has good imagrey... who doesnt like clean teeth???

[James Takeo Panton]

This is so sweet and personal.......you put your heart into this in a simple and effective way....