Blood

I'm trying to rewrite this by memory. Not sure if it's going to be as good.

We're blood,

But I still hate you.

We're blood,

And I have no aspiration to save you.

We're blood,

Yet you don't act the part.

Author's Note

Ughh this poem has been bothering me and I just needed to rewrite it some how.

Reviews

[THE BLACK SEAL]

this is powerful as it is. it sinks home for me as well as many others. is this the re-write?

[An owl on the moon]

Powerful even in its brevity. Though blood secures relationships it also deeply stains our lives at times. So hard to walk away from your own skin. Excellent!

[thecoolone52]

i liked it i mean its really short..... but its still pretty good..... you get all your points across so i liked it...

[Wolfwind Words]

I got the image of a family squable or a chasm beteen siblings. And it is kinds lacking something..hmmm
Keep it up, you figure it out. :)