Brief and concise. I like it. It is true that anger hinders the possibility of writing any story or poem for that matter but it can also be a good theme for a piece. Nice job here.
I seriously just stood up in the middle of my class and yelled "exactly!" lol .... you wouldn't believe the looks I just got from my classmates and professor ... lol .... some of them could have killed me and others just looked at me like I am a freak .... but I am running on little less than 2 hours of sleep and I totally know what you mean in this poem..... and it isn't dumb ... it is short and in your face .... very good!!! I hate it when I can't write .... which is often........ and seeing as I am pursuing a career in writing that isn't really a good thing ..... lol ..... well I better get to work .... keep up the good work :)
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Ya huh...lolz
i get that sometimes...
lol
Pretty sure, the WritersCafe deleting all their writing business...would've hit you hard, you've done quite a bit of writing.
lol...
I haven't even bothered beginning to put them all up again, because...It's just too much effort :P