Unforgettable

You're just too damn unforgettable.

I love every word you breathe and

Every glance I steal.

I love how you're just too damn unforgettable.

Even as we're miles and miles apart,

I can still hear your voice,

I can still feel your touch,

And I can still hold you close to my heart.

Why are you just too damn unforgettable?

 

Reviews

[THE BLACK SEAL]

wow i really loved this one

[LostCauze[:P]]

Short, Sweet and to the point. I really enjoyed this piece and you have alot of sentences worth mentioning. Some of your lines felt powerful, "Every Glance I Steal" such as this one because it was also clever. Keep writing.

[H. A. M.]

Desire.
This is a good one.
You capture that feeling well in this.
Sometimes this is all you can say.
I enjoyed wallowing in your passion.

[Sexy Jones]

I swear this makes me think of my fiance.
Especially the part:
"Every glance I steal."
I'm always looking at him while he's not paying attention.
I like to just take him all in becuase he so damn sexy.

Also the part:
"Even as we're miles and miles apart,
I can still hear your voice,
I can still feel your touch,"

I've felt that way before.
I enjoyed reading this.
It made me reminisce.