Oh Summer

Oh my dear summer,

Why must you take so long now?

You are killing me.

 

February seems

Like forever, sixteen more

Days until sweet March.

Reviews

[THE BLACK SEAL]

this was beautifully done. so short and yet so passion filled..

[An owl on the moon]

The essence of this poem must be on nearly everyone's mind right now! Love your personalization of the seasons!

[Nicholas Hallows]

I can relate to this! 'dear summer' really gives the impression of a friend you are missing. I'm counting down to April myself. Nice write. NH

[Kara Emily Krantz]

aw. this is so cute lol

and it hits upon exactly what i've been feeling.

I like how you call summer your dear Summer, too.... it made it gentle, pleading.

And the exact countdown was a cool little addition, too. It's like "not that I'm counting but" !!!!!

I can not wait for summer myself. or at least Spring. Maybe I'll write a little poem to Spring, hehe

hugs

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is a very sweet piece. I always love these kinds of pieces..
Small yet straight and vivid.
An awesome read !