Spaceship

Spaceship

A Poem by Capaneus

    He lets the birds fly in the sky

    Coolest guy

    Makes the sun set right on time

    She's all mine

    Greatest ever spaceship to stage our play

    Watches everyday

    While He's on Her way

 

 

 

© 2016 Capaneus


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If God and Mother Nature had sex would a new planet be born?
Complete with all the working parts? Deep thoughts here?


Posted 8 Years Ago


Papaya

8 Years Ago

Ha. That was not bad. :)
Papaya

8 Years Ago

What's the video?
Capaneus

8 Years Ago

Portland I think, gotta have a video for youtube
Sorry but i am hopeless at understanding poetry. I thought God was the he but then the she confused me. Although a he she God would make mOre sense. I think a short poem can be great if it's well written. I can sense something profound here but I can't quite grasp it
Well done.
Alan

Posted 8 Years Ago


Capaneus

8 Years Ago

you got it, a Godly planet with male and female aspects. don't do a lot of cryptic stuff, i'm the p.. read more

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Added on September 7, 2016
Last Updated on September 7, 2016