Solitaire in Solitary Confinement

It's solitaire in solitary confinement

saddest place you've ever been is well into you

it's what if and wasn't to blame

sensibly sliding insane

Centrical symbol, a spiral would do

simply sedating the game

setting their board as a sigh lumbers ford

sensible siding insane

awe skew late shuffle, the bottom eye's shut

one card was never enough

hopelessly hopin the door would have opened

wasting away on we cut

homily starting again

this punitive push in the end

what sort of game plays on a personal error way

would soundlessly sanction sanguine

Solo saline sapiens

saddest place ever has been

assembled there waiting slowly dissipating

cerebrally self aiding spin

How'd solitaire in Solitary win

saddest place ever has been

What sort of game plays on a personal error ways

and soundlessly sanctions sanguine

Reviews

[Papaya]

I like this one.
I didn't realize what a spiril was until I googled it.
(small brain and all being at max vocab capacity...)
Good poem.

[Capaneus]

thanks, I was trying to write a sadder song than "my heroes have always been cowboys." now where'd I put willie nelsons #...

[anonymous]

Three words: sensibly sliding insane.
I loved it!

[Capaneus]

:) thanks, gotta kick outta that one myself. funny story, i was actually singing 'my heroes have always been cowboys' while playing solitaire in solitary confinement (turns out there's no laws regarding horses corpses in texas:P) when that first line came to me. tried to play it into a relationship metaphore. glad you liked it