My life..

i have been made stronger and tougher

Once in my life, i have found my rivals,
who had nothing to do but to give me trials.
they turned my world into a useless vial,
a world of emptiness without a friend to dial.

they put the world upon my shoulder,
they add to my grief for me to suffer.
i don't have any weapon but the courage to conquer,
to continue life for me to go stronger.

i traveled the cold and dark road on my own.
I'd surpass the life and dark hard blown.
i walked the whole world all alone
wishing that my new world is my own.

but i don't feel leverage for putting me a lot of detour.
because of them i got my entire endeavor
i just want to thank them for making me tougher
for building the new me that now is such a fighter..

Author's Note

your rivals just make you stronger

Reviews

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Such a positive message-nice work on the rhyming, dude! Although look out for the capital letters!