What You Do.

What You Do.

A Poem by Kaspar Carr
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what you do is so amazing babe how do you do it?

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When i look at you,
my heart skips a beat.
Its this feeling i get
from my head down to my feet.
When i hear your voice,
I can not help but to smile.
It seems like it calms me,
and makes it all worthwhile.
When we touch,
our bodies seem to glow.
I feel completely safe,
please never let go.

© 2011 Kaspar Carr


Author's Note

Kaspar Carr
ilove you jmam
you have made me a better man

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Simple. Simply great.

PS. I think you should edit the 10th lines a bit. Just a thought.

Keep writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Kaspar Carr
Kaspar Carr

Anywhere., NC



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Hello, My name is Kaspar I am 20, I live in America, I love poetry and quotes. Happily taken and in love since November 25th, 2010. Never tell me the sky’s the limit when there are footp.. more..

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