My puzzled mind

My puzzled mind

A Poem by Kaspar Carr
"

why does she do this to my mind?!

"

We lasted 2 and 1/2 long years
We were just 'two different people'
When can we be together again
And make our love a sequal

Our lips pressed hard together
I felt you looking at me,
The lights were out
but your silloette I'd see

I know you felt something
When we layed as one
Was it something that you wanted
Or something just for fun

He's not right for you
As anyone can tell
I could be the guy for you
To keep you warm and well

We were the perfect couple
So many people said we were
Don't let us go
Not for someone like him

I can't wait around for you
For forever and a day
We with me, kiss me, love me
Like you did yesterday

We were like jelly beans
We stuck together
Add some glue
And we're in it forever

I can offer you more than
he could ever do
I won't let you down
I would never argue

It kills me to know
We had our special night
For you and I
I'll always fight

How did he
Sweep you off your feet
You and I fell inlove
Before we had the chance to meet

Anyone can see
There's something special in us
Im not like him
I don't need the lust

I have ached for and with you
For almost 3 years
In my dreams
You whisper I love you in my ears

I turn around and your not there
But I know it was your voice
With love between us
There's just no time to make your choice

I can love you
More than he could
I long for you
More than he would

He jumps from girl to girl
To keep himself feeling cared for
I don't need girls to give me love
I need your love. We shared far more

I'll wait for you
To see what you want for yourself
But I won't sit still forever
Im not a book on a shelf.

We broke up cause you claimed I was moody and emotional
And you date him.
Who is everything you said I was.

© 2010 Kaspar Carr


Author's Note

Kaspar Carr
why does she
make me think she loves mewhen i have a feelng she doesnt

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An incredibly heartfelt and emotional poem. This poem clearly shows how unbearable this feeling/situation can seem...

Very nice work here.

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Kaspar Carr
Kaspar Carr

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Hello, My name is Kaspar I am 20, I live in America, I love poetry and quotes. Happily taken and in love since November 25th, 2010. Never tell me the sky’s the limit when there are footp.. more..

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