Piece of My Heart

Piece of My Heart

A Poem by Kaspar Carr
"

You are staying here even when you say you leave i tell by your words your still there

"

I see your face,
on the backs of my eyelids and throbbing in my heart.
I couldn't place,
all the pieces; I'm missing a part.

Wait,
there is a light, I see it shining in you and into forever.
Fate,
or something stronger, pushing and pulling us together.

Something went wrong,
but you're still here with me and desperately holding on.
Somewhere along,
the way we lost it, but it's not gone.

Wait,
there is something more buried in the memories, hiding in your smile.
Fate,
or something better, causing you to stay for a while.

© 2010 Kaspar Carr


Author's Note

Kaspar Carr
the joy is comming back to my heart Thank you

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First off, your repetition is very effective here, so great use of that. Second off, I love the story you present! It's beautiful, and somewhat melancholy, but mostly uplifting. Wonderful work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Kaspar Carr
Kaspar Carr

Anywhere., NC



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Hello, My name is Kaspar I am 20, I live in America, I love poetry and quotes. Happily taken and in love since November 25th, 2010. Never tell me the sky’s the limit when there are footp.. more..

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