Should I

Should I

A Poem by Kaspar Carr
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what the blody hell should i do!?

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Should I just be pleased

Where all decisions are eased

Just go with the flow

And take life slow



Should I never have to worry

Go nowhere in a hurry

Always have a smile on my face

And know my place



Should I take pride and joy

And be a good boy

Know what people think

Make decisions at a blink



Should I laugh at every joke

Never use my finger to poke

Always do a good job

And never be a slob



Should I love every day

Know what to say

Know when to talk

Not be like cheese and chalk



Should I be all of these things

Wait and see what life brings

Always check my temper

While away until December

© 2010 Kaspar Carr


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I love this poem; actually, this would make a rather good song! The flow and the rhyming is amazing, so is the idea behind this poem. You are a great writer Canaan! :) Although, I must say, the last line is a bit 'wonky'... But, what the heck! ^^

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Kaspar Carr
Kaspar Carr

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Hello, My name is Kaspar I am 20, I live in America, I love poetry and quotes. Happily taken and in love since November 25th, 2010. Never tell me the sky’s the limit when there are footp.. more..

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