Bleed

wrote this after a really bad brakeup

Do you see it too?
I'm bleeding.
All over.
Blood.
Dripping.
Into puddles on the floor.
"I would bleed my whole heart out for you."
I always said.
And now I am.
Lying here.
Dying.
I see you smiling.
You don't care.
I don't care.

Guess we have something in common now.

Author's Note

good? bad?

Reviews

[Kaspar Carr]

sorry
it was ment to be heart

[Ashley.M.E]

I like it... I can't relate or anything...
"I would bleed my whole heard out for you."
the whole heard?
makes no since to me to be honest.