Ride

A Poem by Dream Catcher

Well, just thoughts running.

Stitched lips,

With pride hanging on your hips.

I've said it when your ears were closed,

And I kept silent when they were open.

Walking past the edge,

Of our dreams and destiny.

This brings a whole new meaning,

To where the sidewalk ends.

Hanging on the cliff,

Piano notes dance in your head.

The songs we sing when were in love,

The songs we write when were heartbroken.

Just barely missing your fate,

I was too late to fly.

Destiny, I hope I'll meet my maker,

To figure out my eternity.

If the sky truly is full,

Maybe life wouldn't be so dull.

Sinners are labels we toss aside,

When our dear love is on the line.

Travel, ride through the night,

Stars and wind will guide you.

If you get lost ask your fate,

"Do I end here or do you end here?"

Stitched heart,

Even though you're ten minutes away,

I feel so apart.

© 2010 Dream Catcher

Author's Note

I guess leave whatever. Thank you for the support.

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"Sinners are labels we toss aside,
When our dear love is on the line."- for some reason I love this line! You say you're not that good of a writer but I think you're great!

Posted 13 Years Ago

PianoandPage

i like this. especially the line about "sinners are labels". that tapped into an unspoken truth i think so many can connect with and you wrote it out so beautifully and simply.

this whole piece has a sort of fractured innocence to it. like, you can FEEL how the narrator is growing up, that akward emergence into adult responsiblities like love, separation, children, etc etc. it has that vibe.

some of the "destiny & fate" stuff got a little nebulous but it isn't bad. i think you have massive potential and you have a natural gift at capturing real human stories which you should continue to develop!