I Won't Forget You.

It's about a man that loves his wife more than anything and she loves him more than anything too. Then she dies. =/

If you were to die in love,

Would love die in death?

Can you fly high above,

Even if you're in the ground at such a depth?

Many think only pain causes crying,

But even crying causes pain.

Did you have to scream while dieing?

your voice is burned in my brain.

Even though you're dead your beauty stays,

The look on your face was so cold.

Can we try and bring back those days,

Were we didn't get to tell the stories untold?

How will I be able to sleep at night,

While your shadow dances on the wall?

I scream and scream your name with all my might,

It seems as though darkness was the downfall.

I sit on the ground and watch the setting sun,

As the birds sing songs that fill my head.

It never seemed like my life had become undone,

Until I saw you're face that was broken and dead.

Author's Note

Any type of comment would be nice. Long/short, rude/nice. Thank you. <3

Reviews

[I'llPlayTheJuliet]

Josh, Josh, Josh...
Everytime I read your work I'm even more amazed at your talent and to be honest alittle jealous xP
This like all your others I have read is with out a doubt amazing. You have this ability to draw the reader in and make them feel as the Charactors in your writes feel. That is a gift many writers would be envious of.
Long review; short...
Your amazing, as is your writing, this was a wonderful write, keep doing what your doing, and never forget me when your famous.
I was the first one to call you mr.fenix :D

-Xhan

[GP]

Crazy good! Crazy sad! Crazy deep!

[Chelsea]

I really have enjoyed reading your poems. I find that your poems have the most emotion behind any I've read. But also true emotion which is the key thing here.
I like the first two lines. You kicked the poem off to a wonderful start. I had to read your poem several times to get all! But this has so much to give and so much food for thought, I marvel.
Good stuff, 100/100
dinoRAWR
& added to my favourites

[hmm]

I really liked this i thought it was emotional

[Courtland Sky]

dear joshua,
this poem is amazing. it really expresses how much pain there is the world. this poem is kind of similar to one of mine called the wronger. you should review it.

[Jane Doe]

I LIKIE JOSHAY!:D
-lil sis yO!
teehee......
100/100

[stars are far]

it is seems really perfect to me
i like it:)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Good poem. I really think it is good. I think it has good emotions in it. Thanks for sharing.