Baby, Poems Are Sweet.

I wrote this during my flight. It evolved from me seeing a bird.

No matter what you do to it,

A word is still a word.

Even if you broke its wings,

A bird is still a bird.

Take the words out of it and see,

A song is still a song.

Even if you make a thousand apologies,

A wrong is still a wrong.

You can run off with all the things you said to me,

A love is still a love.

Paint its white beauty black and still,

A dove is still a dove.

You can hide it behind smiles and laughs but,

A tear is still a tear.

Having someone there still won’t protect you,

A fear is still a fear.

Even if you get it smashed,

A heart is still a heart.

You always have to stay strong,

Even when everything breaks apart.

Reviews

[Sam Severn]

This is just plain freakin' MAGNIFICENT!!!!!!!!!!! I love the simplicity, the rhythm, the flow.......but mostly I love what it SEZ! ㋡

[Scarlett Willows]

THIS IS MY FAVORTIE!

[smalltownsympathies]

Love this. Usually I don't enjoy it when writing has repetition in it, but you didn't abuse the power. This was fantastic. :)

[Tate Morgan]

I think it better if it were distilled to the nexus and made shoeter perhaps It seems a bit too repetative

[deeps]

I think this is very well written and so well expressed.
Such an amazing write here.

[Huggy Bear]

I really like this poem it shows a great mind

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I loved this Josh. It shows your cute side. Not your dark emo stuff. This one is cute and amazing. I think this is my favorite poem by you. It is making me smile because it is so cute. Your dark stuff is nice, but I like this one the best. I really love it. Good points in it. Awwwwww I love it Josh. Thanks for sharing. :)
:')

[A.Lee]

I don't get completely "wowed" by many poems, but this one did it. I love this piece. Great work!!

[Christine]

From someone who tends to write alot, all I have to say about this piece is: wow. Great work. Thank you for sharing.

[NightsShade]

I really feel as if I don't need to say anything here. Great job here, it's truly shown your improvement as a writer. I only have one constructive thing to say, I think that you should continue on with this piece. You could add such more to it and improve it further.