Redamancy #4

Redamancy #4

A Poem by Camryn Jeter

...and you left.

and for another two weeks

you'll only be text messages

and phone calls

The brightest fires never burn very long.

© 2015 Camryn Jeter


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The brief poem really emphasizes the metaphor on the final line which I have to say concludes the poem nicely especially with the cliff hanger start. I feel to improve (although the simplicity was a good effect) try a more descriptive style.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Camryn Jeter

9 Years Ago

Thanks! I'll definitely try that.

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Added on January 14, 2015
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