Bridal Loops and Risers

Get her out of those buckles, make her wiggle
  Learned fingers tracing her every silky crease
Manually adventuring amidst her supple folds
  Turning her over and over, send the air out of her!
And then an arm across her skirt, fold her lovingly but firmly

Now I can count on her to open next time I jump

My gift of compassion I want to utilize

My gift of compassion I want to utilize

Reviews

[Nonnye]

Good poetry is like good wine for me. I cannot analyze it, it either hits my senses or not. Your title was excellent it started the journey. It gave a hint and tickled the brain. I know just enough about the subject to have it teased out of memory by the way you used your words but then you made me question where I thought this was going. Then the last line took me back to the title! It was like having icy water flicked on my face. Loved it

[Cambion]

Thanks for reading my poem! I'm so glad it pleased you.

[Nonnye]

You're welcome. It was a pleasure.

[Johari]

Like a quality Burlesque performance! :-)

[Vanesa Markovic]

I like the vagueness of this piece.
I'm always a fan of work that enables the reader
to reveal some of their own consciousness through interpretation.
Personally, I found this quite sensual. Carnal.
I must admit, I find that rather amusing upon reading your note.
Oops.
Hahaha.
-VM

[Cambion]

Does a dedication like that tend to reduce readability or muddle the effect? I'm trying to work out that aspect of delivery. Sometimes I get in another mood writing the dedication and it becomes out of phase with the associated work. It's a learning process ;)

[Vanesa Markovic]

It certainly doesn't reduce readability, but I do believe it overshadows personal interpretation. read moreIt certainly doesn't reduce readability, but I do believe it overshadows personal interpretation.
When an artist gives context to their piece, it becomes, for me at least, the sole truth of the work.
When there is no explanation given, the possibilities remain limitless.
I suppose it really depends on how you want your work to be read.
-VM

[Cambion]

Glad I asked, dedication stripped. Loyalty of women still of premium value and appreciated. Thanks for candor!

[Matching Socks]

Lol. Some equestrian sport. Well done. :)
Good to see your posting again. Cheers!

[Cambion]

Wow, you interpreted this in a manner completely different than my intention, and yet it still makes sense. Woohoo, chalk one up for the triple entendre (unentendre?) Thanks Ana :)

[ANTO]

this is masterful Mr C - so many ways to take this - the reader brings their own - and leaves with the sum of both - brilliant - you sly fox lol
Bravo - and I dont get my French out for just anybody !! ;p

[Cambion]

Your stamp of approval is a big part of any success my work may enjoy.

[ANTO]

You flatter me - really C - thank you for saying such a kind thing.