Isolation Senryu

Were I a dead man,
Someone might notice the scent
Finally, a guest

Author's Note

孤独は冷たい火です

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

when loneliness creeps in, you can feel invisible.. sometimes finding refuge in that isolation, other times just wishing anyone would notice.... they would see... in this case smell.. any attention--negative or otherwise is attention, right?... first piece I have read of yours and have to say, not only did you make me think, but I FELT it as well.. nicely done.. can't wait to read more:)

[Cambion]

I hope I can say you have good taste without suggesting that my work is anything but humble. Thanks for the kind words!

[AprilRN1210]

We can all "say" what we like, but usually, the work "speaks" for itself :)
you are more than welcome, it was my pleasure...

[Fran Marie]

No doubt ..a very cool senryu..well done..

[Lizardo]

Great words of wisdom here.

[Vanesa Markovic]

Wow!
This is powerfully emotive,
not easy to accomplish in such short work.
Well done!
-VM

[Cambion]

Kindness becomes you. Thanks for looking at my work.

[Zahra]

Cool senryu... very nice.

[Cambion]

Thanks so much.

[Matching Socks]

Cool little Senryu sir...

[Cambion]

Thanks! Your kindness beautifies my comments page.

[Matching Socks]

I'm glad I could be of service. :)

[ANTO]

Hah - thats class - I have a keen sense of smell thats why Im here mate - like a shark..lol

[Cambion]

Thanks again! You ever check out AllPoetry.com? bunch of interesting resources for getting your stuff more widely seen

[ANTO]

Not heard of the site Cambion - I have been invited to HP by a writer here though - do you rate that site?? I value your opinion mate

[ANTO]

did my kindness not beautify your page then cambion - well thats just fine and dandy that is .. I was here first

[ANTO]

just larking about there Cambion mate - sorry

[Cambion]

I'm not sure what HP is in this context.

[ANTO]

HP is hello Poetry - but the reason I said sorry was for the comment about my kindness not beautifying your page - like you said to Ana the poet. I was being sarcastic - very low form of wit but Im sorry mate

[Cambion]

np bro, thanks for the link