Goodnight Pt. 1

Darkness comes in

As day fades away

Light is removed

As shadows take its place

Strange noises come out to play their part.

To scare the young child sitting in the dark.

Reviews

[KAREN]

I'm an adult and still hate the dark! Nicely penned.

[Cameron@Poet]

Well thank u very much Karen!

[KAREN]

You're welcome!

[M. J. Smith]

When I was younger, I lived in a home surrounded on three sides by a cemetery. The shadows seemed extra scary there. Nicely done, Sir.

[Cameron@Poet]

I'm not gonna lie, I feel like living basically within a cemetery would be truly terrifying. Thank you! :)

[Aluppi Jampur]

The beginning of something ominous maybe?

[Cameron@Poet]

perhaps...thanks for commenting!! :)

[Lathen Griffiths]

I thought it very clever how

[Cameron@Poet]

how.....
Thanks for commenting Lathen! :)

[Cameron@Poet]

haha i see what u did there with breaking up your comment into 3 parts as well:))