Betty Blue Beetle

Betty Blue Beetle bounced a ball

She hooted and hollered all down the hall

She wrote weird little words all over the walls

She freaked out Funny-looking Fred and made him fall

And caused commotion and chaos whenever her mother was called

But when presented to Principle Penelope she couldn't, she wouldn't recall

"I didn't do anything," said Ms. Beetle, "Nothing at all."

Author's Note

A lot of alliteration in this one

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

A feast of alliteration here. A misbehaving beetle, now that's original thinking. Great fun.

Chris

[Cameron@Poet]

Thanks for commenting! :)

[Writergurl]

Goodness, this is amazing, love the rhyme and flow
cute write

[Cameron@Poet]

Thank you so much!!! :) It's really satisfying creating my own characters. :)

[Cameron@Poet]

More writes coming later today!:)

[Writergurl]

cool.... i will read