Dead in the Dark

This is where you go when you die...

Deep down

Where darkness

Surrounds

The only sound

Is the trickle of water.

Downward deep

Is where they meet,

The old man and the old man's daughter.

Burnt to a crisp

The two are now

Missed

Even by the man who slaughtered.

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[Writergurl]

The old man and the old man's daughter.
Burnt to a crisp
The two are now
Missed
Even by the man who slaughtered.

VERY, vivid imagery... enjoyed this

[Cameron@Poet]

Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for commenting!! :)