Life Full of Problems

If I disappear, you won't miss me. You aren't missing out on anything other than being annoyed by yours truly.

Why is my life so hard, I'm wondering if I should stay.

Sometimes I wake up and I think about if I should pray

But man, forget that, God never helps me out anyway.

So I get dressed and wonder if it'll suck today.

People try to tell me to keep negative thoughts at bay

But I embrace them, that's kinda what make me, me in a way.

And anyway, some people sit around and assume I'm gay,

But they don't even have the decency to come say "hey."

I feel like some people are made to make me have a bad day

And I don't know, it's kinda like the world is tryna make me pay

'Cause there's always people comin' at my feelings that are tryna slay.

So don't be afraid if I disappear, if I go MIA.

I know this poem is kinda deep and it might stir a little hay

But let people know if it impacts you in any way.

Author's Note

Some things in this one may get misunderstood so if you have questions just ask and I will answer to the best of my ability. Just know that nothing in this poem is a dis.

Reviews

[poetgurl]

such a powerful read here...

[Cameron@Poet]

Thank you! :)
It was driven by my emotions

[Writergurl]

I dislike when people judge others, I get this write...
Nicely written

[Cameron@Poet]

Thank you! I also dislike it, because most of the time people tend to judge without even trying to talk to a person first, like in this poem. :)

[rmarrwrites]

Bit worrying, the first line. Good read though, and it's really impressive you found the same rhyme for all those lines while keeping up the rhythm. Typo on the fourth last line - "sley" instead of "slay."

[Cameron@Poet]

Thank you so much!! Good catch. I'm going to fix it now. Glad you liked it! :)

[rmarrwrites]

Oh also I didn't see it until now but the preview/description thing in quotation marks has "truely" instead of "truly."

[Cameron@Poet]

It should be "truly"?

[rmarrwrites]

At least how I've seen it spelled in modern writing, and I can't find anything on google that says there's an alternative

[Cameron@Poet]

Ya you're right. I looked on Google and it said "truely" is just a common mistake. Thanks for the saves!! :)

[John the Baptist]

That first line has an ominous sound to it. The following ones contain thoughts that verge on paranoia, bitterness and a general tendency toward negative thinking. My advice would be to avoid both sharp objects and country music.

[Cameron@Poet]

Thank you. Good advice...but i have a country music playlist on Spotify soooo