What Really Happened With Jack and Jill

Jack and Jill went up a hill...

Most of us know

The sad story of Jack

And even sadder Jill.

The boy that cracked his head on a rock

The girl that got them killed.

Jill was a silly girl who liked to play

And decided to trip Jack up.

As they landed Jill started to scream

She started to yell "Fu-!"

Jill didn't finish the word though

Because both kids were dead.

And that's the story of a silly girl

And a boy that cracked his head.

Reviews

[rmarrwrites]

I love this, it's funny and black but it still conserves the playful tone.

[Cameron@Poet]

Thank you! I wrote this like two years ago and up until today my sister was the only one that ever read. I'm glad you like it! :)